Essay 12

David Garbo Jr.

Pine Point School

4/13/11

Mr. Salsich      

                                                                        My Best Friends

                                                           An essay about my two best friends.

Friendship is something that human beings can’t live without. At times I felt like I had no friends, but the people I am about to describe were always there for me when I needed them to be. They were always there when most of my other friends weren’t.

When it comes to friends in life, they were never a problem for me. One Friend that I have always recognized is my dad. My dad has always been there for me when I need him. My father and I have a great relationship together, and I definitely recognize that. When I think of my relationship with my dad, I think of a tree. As I grow older the tree between my father and I becomes bigger and bigger. Every day I discover a new branch on the tree, and on that branch are endless memories with my father. Another good friend I have is Daniel D’Amato. My relationship with Dan is like a never-ending movie. As soon as you think the movie is almost over, something amazing happens. Throughout my life I have had many great friends, but none like these two that I have just described.

            The friendship I share with these two people is like no other. I have had amazing memories with Daniel and my Dad, doing things that you just can’t imagine. From driving through blocked off roads because of extreme flooding with my Dad, to hiding in the bushes with Dan, while playing airsoft. These two people are not only friends, but more like family.


                                                        Self Assessment

1. One strong point i see in this essay us my conclusion. I was very specific in my conclusion. I did as Mr. Salsich said, and wasn't vauge.

2. A weak point in this essay one week point in this esay is my interoduction. I had a hard time puting my thoughts on to paper while writing this introduction, and I am not satisfied with whati ended up with.

3. I thin i deserve a B- for this essay. Although it had it's rough spots i think i did a very good job in being specific, and choosing the right words for each sentence.