Monday, May 9, 2011

Final project


By: David Garbo Jr.
Mr. Salsich
PinePoint school


Dear Reader:

            What you are about to read is a unique essay about growing up. Growing up seems to be a very complicated process, and that’s because it is. From making it through elementary school, to being successful throughout high school, childhood is a tough thing. As I look back at all my past challenges I realize that I have had many, but still have many to go. Childhood is a, “Required assignment” in life.  Many things in life can be somehow avoided, but childhood isn’t. To start your life, you must start with childhood, no question about it. As I sit here at my computer and write this paragraph, I realize that I sound very negative, but childhood is the exact opposite. When I think of childhood and growing up, I think of opportunity, and that’s exactly what childhood is made of, endless opportunity. 


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5       Steps for a Great Childhood
1.      A loving family that cares about not only you, but your future.
2.      A school that support your needs.
3.      Friends to help with emotions when things go wrong.
4.      Someone that will spend time, and support the activities you love.
5.      A pet, because everyone should have the experience of taking care of an animal.
  
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A Letter to David
50 Years in The Future

Dear David:

            As I sit here and write to myself, I think. I think of how different my life will be 50 years from now. I think of how the world will change, and if it will be for the better or for worse.  I know I won’t be the same person I am now, but I hope I still have my inner childhood. Being 64 years old, I must be crying right now, as I remember what the assignment was for my final project, from my English teacher, Mr. Salsich, who I will never forget. The great memories coming back into my mind of great friends, which I know I will still have 50 years from now.
             So many things are a mystery to me as a 14 year old boy, but I know that in the future, all of those mysteries will be known. I am a pilot, a doctor, or I am running my dad’s business, which at that time would be almost 100 years old.  I have all the answers; I just haven’t found them yet as a 14 year old boy. The future lies in me, and I can form it to my liking, as long as I put the hard work and dedication into whatever I 
am doing, just like my parents did.


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A Story about Childhood

            As he sat in his room, he thought, he thought about his childhood, and how much he loves his life. All the things he loves, and all thing things he doesn’t love, he thinks about. He thinks about what will happen when he doesn’t have these things, and how tragic it will be, but life has many beginnings and may ends. He has a best friend named Daniel, a person that he couldn’t live without. Although life will end, he feels like his friendship wont. Through childhood, and adulthood, this pair of, “soul brothers” will never split apart. Although there might be tough times, the friends seem to always work out the kinks. He’s worked his hardest to be successful in school, and will continue in high school. That was a story about the short childhood of David Garbo Jr. which is still in process, and will change as time goes on. 



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A Comparison between Romeo & Juliet and To Kill a Mockingbird

            The first thing that I think of when these two stories come to mind is struggle.  As Jem and Scout try to make Boo, “come out” they run into many struggles. As of Romeo and Juliet, they encounter many problems, as they fall in love. Although these two stories sound very much alike, they are also very different. For example, one struggle R&J (Romeo and Juliet) deals with is family. In To Kill a Mockingbird, there is no conflict when it comes to family. If it weren’t for family conflict in R&J, the book would be uninteresting. If there was family conflict in To Kill a Mockingbird, I think the book would be much sadder. Either way you look at it, these two stories are both very well written, and many people think they are some of the best stories ever made.

            Growing up is a natural process that takes place in everyone’s life. You can ask any adult about their childhood, and they will most likely have many stories, good and bad, to tell you. Although many people I know are already adults, I believe that there is always an inner childhood left in every adult’s heart. In that heart there are good times and bad, but they will always be there for us to reflect upon. 


Monday, May 2, 2011

Final project


By: David Garbo Jr.
Mr. Salsich
PinePoint school


Dear Reader:

            What you are about to read is a unique essay about growing up. Growing up seems to be a very complicated process, and that’s because it is.  From making it through elementary school, to being successful throughout high school, childhood is a tough thing. As I look back at all my past challenges I realize that I have had many, but still have many to go. Childhood is a, “Required assignment” in life.  Many things in life can be somehow avoided, but childhood isn’t. To start your life, you must start with childhood, no question about it. As I sit here at my computer and write this paragraph, I realize that I sound very negative, but childhood is the exact opposite. When I think of childhood and growing up, I think of opportunity, and that’s exactly what childhood is made of, endless opportunity.


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5 Steps for a Great Childhood
  1. A loving family that cares about not only you, but your future.
  2. A school that support your needs.
  3. Friends to help with emotions when things go wrong.
  4. Someone that will spend time, and support the activities you love.
    5. A pet, because everyone should have the experience of taking care of an animal.

Thursday, April 28, 2011

Freestyle Writing 4/28/11


Freestyle Writing 4/28/11


            Looking back at past memories, I realize that there are many things in my life that I should be grateful for. From having great Christmases with my family, to simply having a family. There are so many people in the world that aren’t fortunate enough to have a loving family. Every night my family gets together to eat dinner. Although this isn’t a huge deal, it is one of those little things that not many people get to experience. This is something that I definitely take for granted. Family is a big part of most of our lives, and we should all recognize that.

Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Paragraph 1 Essay #13


David Garbo Jr.
Pine Point School
4/20/11
Essay #13
     

In my eyes, love is a word that I don’t understand beyond my family. Because of my limited experience, when I think of true love, I think of my parents. As a teenager  I am just beginning to understand the subject of  love, but still have lots to learn.
True love is something that is often has a rare occurrence. When true love occurs it’s extraordinary. Sometimes people think that they are falling in love with someone when they really aren't. I think that when I "fall" in love, all my peers will be able to tell. True love doesn't happen instantaneously. A couple will usually have to work hard, and build their relationship from the ground up; I think this is how true love will happen for me. True love can happen when you least expect it. True love is an amazing thing, and everybody should have the chance to experience it.
One couple I know that is definitely in true love is my parents. The first thing I think of when true love is brought up is my mother and father. My Mom and Dad have had their hard times, just like most couples. In the end true love brought them back together.  In any relationship there will always be times of anger. If the couple truly cares for each other, true love will bring them back together. I truly believe this is what happened to my parents just last year.
Love is truly an amazing thing, and I definitely understand that.  My life has had a great example of what true love can really do. The best gift my parents ever gave to me was getting back together, and I will always recognize how they cherish one another.
Self-Assessment:
What I Did Well: One thing I thing I think I did well was my conclusion. For some reason this conclusion seemed to click for me.
One thing I can work on:  Something that I definitely could have worked on is my first body paragraph. For some reason, I had a very hard time getting my thoughts onto paper.
Grade I Deserve:  I think I deserve a B- for this essay. There are a few problems that could be polished more, but I think i did well.

Outline Essay #13

Paragraph 1


TS: True love is something that is often rare

SD: When true love occurs it extraordinary

CM: Sometimes people think that they are falling in love with someone wen they really aren't

CM: But when they really are, not only the person, but everyone around you can tell that you are falling in love.


SD: Ofen true love doesn't happen instantaneously

CM: the couple will usually have to work har and build there relationship from the ground up.

CM: True love is a tough thing but can happen all the time.

CS: True love is something that often comes naturaly without too much hassle.


Paragraph 2


TS: One couple i know that is deffinetely in true love is my parents.

SD: The first thing i think of when true love is brought up is my mother and father.

CM: My mom and dad have had their hard times

CM: I n the end true love brought them back together.


SD: In any relationship there will always be times of anger.

CM: If the couple truluy care for each other, true love will bring them back together.

CS: I truly believe this is what happened to my parents

Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Sonnet

4/19/11
David Garbo Jr.
English

A Friendship Sonnet
Longtime friendship can never be replaced
Having a person who is always there 
To help or comfort you with difficulties you faced 
Who will side with you when life is unfair 
True friendship can’t and will never go to waste
A brief comrade can never compare 
No real commitment is done with haste 
Years together help to make the best pair

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Essay 12

David Garbo Jr.
Pine Point School
4/13/11
Mr. Salsich      
                                                                        My Best Friends
                                                           An essay about my two best friends.

Friendship is something that human beings can’t live without. At times I felt like I had no friends, but the people I am about to describe were always there for me when I needed them to be. They were always there when most of my other friends weren’t.
When it comes to friends in life, they were never a problem for me. One Friend that I have always recognized is my dad. My dad has always been there for me when I need him. My father and I have a great relationship together, and I definitely recognize that. When I think of my relationship with my dad, I think of a tree. As I grow older the tree between my father and I becomes bigger and bigger. Every day I discover a new branch on the tree, and on that branch are endless memories with my father. Another good friend I have is Daniel D’Amato. My relationship with Dan is like a never-ending movie. As soon as you think the movie is almost over, something amazing happens. Throughout my life I have had many great friends, but none like these two that I have just described.
            The friendship I share with these two people is like no other. I have had amazing memories with Daniel and my Dad, doing things that you just can’t imagine. From driving through blocked off roads because of extreme flooding with my Dad, to hiding in the bushes with Dan, while playing airsoft. These two people are not only friends, but more like family.


                                                        Self Assessment

1. One strong point i see in this essay us my conclusion. I was very specific in my conclusion. I did as Mr. Salsich said, and wasn't vauge.

2. A weak point in this essay one week point in this esay is my interoduction. I had a hard time puting my thoughts on to paper while writing this introduction, and I am not satisfied with whati ended up with.

3. I thin i deserve a B- for this essay. Although it had it's rough spots i think i did a very good job in being specific, and choosing the right words for each sentence.