Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Essay 12 Outline

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TS: Friends in life were never a problem for me
SD: One Friend that I have always recognized in my life is my Dad
CM: My had has always been there for me when I need him
CM: My father and I have a great relationship together.

SD: When think of my relationship with my Dad I think of a tree.
CM: As I grow older the tree between my father and I grows bigger and bigger.
CM: Every day I discover a new branch on the tree between my dad and I.

SD: Another good friend I have is Daniel D’Amato
CM: My relationship with Dan is like a never ending movie.
CM: As soon as you think the movie is almost over, something amazing happens.

CS: Throughout my life I have had many great friends, but non like these two that I have just described.

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