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Main Point or Thesis of essay: How I grew up, Where: In Stonington. How: Had lots of fun when it was necessary and was serious when I needed to be.
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Topic sentence: About how growing up should be something to remember.
Supporting Detail: Have moments that you will keep with you, moments that you learn from
Commentary: Strive to learn as much as possible.
Commentary: Be relaxed, don’t worry so much about that one bad grade you got in school
Supporting Detail: My thoughts about the children growing up in TKAM
Commentary: Something I think is wrong about how the children are growing up in TKAM. Such as father not teaching the kids how to shoot.
Commentary: Is Atticus too strict or not.
Supporting Detail: Does growing up effect the rest of your life
Commentary: Explain exactly why. Yes it does, because you will always remember your childhood.
Commentary: Always reflect back to your childhood.
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Comment on the main point or thesis.
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